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tigerclaw & ravenpaw ♥
Tigerclaw brushed past his apprentice in the middle of camp, eying him carefully. "One word against me and you'll find your lungs hanging in a tree.." he snarled under his breath, amber eyes ablaze. Ravenpaw felt bile rise in his throat and he swallowed it down. "Y-yes, Tigerclaw!" He stammered, flattening his ears and scurrying by..
creation ♥
well, I found this hanging out in my WIPs folder, and I kinda liked how it came out. So I colored and added a BG and decided to post it tonight. I hope you guys enjoy it, and give me some honest feedback!
credits ♥
art (C) ME
characters (C) Erin Hunter
YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO TRACE, COPY, ALTER OR STEAL IN ANY WAY. NOR ARE YOU ALLOWED TO USE IN ANY FAN VIDEOS OR CREATIONS. THIS ART IS MINE, AND WILL ALWAYS BE. SO KEEP YOUR PAWS OFF.
Tigerclaw brushed past his apprentice in the middle of camp, eying him carefully. "One word against me and you'll find your lungs hanging in a tree.." he snarled under his breath, amber eyes ablaze. Ravenpaw felt bile rise in his throat and he swallowed it down. "Y-yes, Tigerclaw!" He stammered, flattening his ears and scurrying by..
creation ♥
well, I found this hanging out in my WIPs folder, and I kinda liked how it came out. So I colored and added a BG and decided to post it tonight. I hope you guys enjoy it, and give me some honest feedback!
credits ♥
art (C) ME
characters (C) Erin Hunter
YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO TRACE, COPY, ALTER OR STEAL IN ANY WAY. NOR ARE YOU ALLOWED TO USE IN ANY FAN VIDEOS OR CREATIONS. THIS ART IS MINE, AND WILL ALWAYS BE. SO KEEP YOUR PAWS OFF.
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactHai Cindurr.
Before I critique I'd just like to remind you that you ARE way more experienced and more talented than me. So basically YOUR the one who should be critiqueing me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)" />First off, the paws and the cats in general are amazing. Its magical how you manage such great anatomy and faces. The grass infront is truly dramatically wonderful, and your shading and lighting is a dream come true. (Very cheesy.)
However, A critique must include SOMETHING "mean" so here it goes. Your leaves are realistic, but a lot of them are the same size and are "perfect" leaves. Some leaves have cracks in them, and some are different sizes and colors. (Though you DID change colors) So perhaps maybe more detail in your background area?
The clouds are truly amazing - even if you did use a brush.
I probably shouldn't critique the cats, seeing that you are better than me, but still, I notice that Tigerclaw/star's eye is a bit big, but we all know how hard eyes can be.
Another thing is that Ravenpaw seems a bit skinny. If I remember correctly, it was that he was a rather large cat, and I don't know if they meant fat or tall. But its up to you I guess.
You've done an INCREDIBLE job Cindurr, and I hope your proud <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="
" title="Heart" />